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Cussion Kingdom

Im in the zone its time to get lazy
Nobody can save me slump as a rock
Stuck to the bed nobody can stop me
Thoughts going crazy in the land of nod
Spent the whole week boozing, busting and buzzing
Now my broken body has come to a crash
Drooling and dribbling loving this cussion
Gotta go to work but i cant be assed

Set my alarm for twelve pm
But im still sleeping three hours later
That alarm goes off yet again
I hate waking up I guess im a waster
My hobby is a great one its called snoozing
Ill tell you let me rest for ten minuites more
Tired of working fed up of moving
Turn off the light and shut my door

Submitted: Saturday, December 29, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is part of the song cussion kingdom from my band the great big bargain i wrote this about a year ago. Ots all about my love for my bed

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  • C.N.Prem kumar (1/9/2013 5:04:00 AM)

    Good poem with a touch of laziness. The theme and style really merge well.

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  • Arron Fowler (1/3/2013 1:21:00 PM)

    cheers for advice sun princess i tend to use a lot of slang which needs to stop

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  • Dawn Lambert (1/2/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    it's great to describe the love for your bed but it's better without any coding just s saying....

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  • * Sunprincess * (12/30/2012 8:23:00 AM)

    i see you love your bed..hahaha..love the title of this one
    this line could use a word change..it would be much better
    ~Gotta go to work but i cant be assed~
    Gotta go to work can't be late...sounds much better
    otherwise this is great..love it!

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