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Pandian Angelina (9/5/2009 4:02:00 AM)
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Hi, How nicely you have depicted cyber love, accepting it with a grace and not condemning it like most do for its shallowness. Maybe you depict the shallowness when you say it is just like a pet and kite flying things done for a short time and then forgotten. Your poem, Ashraf, is another painting as beautiful as ever a summers day at the park with a clear sky.
Angel.
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (8/14/2009 12:26:00 PM)
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Hon’ble Poet,
Excellent write up. Relevant for new ages. And a Ten.
Incidentally similar poem you’ll find ‘Lip Lock Rendezvous’ kindly put your valuable opinion and vote if worthy of.
Regards,
dr. sakti
14.08.09.
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Sílvia Oliveira (5/26/2009 7:45:00 PM)
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Dear Ashraful,
Mine are Linda´s and Hema´s words about your 'Cyber Love' - it really deserves a 10! Congrats from Brazil, Sílvia
P.S. Thanks for your comments on my hai ku - it´s meaninul to me!
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Linda Ori (5/23/2009 10:22:00 AM)
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So, that's how it works! I love this poem - filled with beautiful imagery and lovely descriptive detail. Cyberlove can be very rewarding, although not as good as the real thing. Some can speak their true feelings without risking personal involvement. Nicely done!
Linda :)
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Malini Kadir (5/23/2009 7:42:00 AM)
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Love sleeps in the bench like a pet.......you put it very uniquely!
High end world well described....
Dreamy quest.....for jaded dreams
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Niken Kusuma Wardani (5/21/2009 1:24:00 AM)
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Hi, it's great to dive through 'cyber' to 'love', both are full imagination and you suceed to intertwined it as a fact of act which many had experiences. Tks for sharing these interesting line.
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T S (5/17/2009 6:48:00 AM)
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Cyber love..... Virtual Love.......
verus real Love, I know whic one I prefer.
Exquisite write 10 plus
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Darren Koh (5/17/2009 6:35:00 AM)
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nice poem.
special bout cyber love.very unique. rated it 10.
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Marie Shine (5/8/2009 11:26:00 AM)
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I love this poem. Love the imagery and flow of it.
Cyber love....................... 'ok', but NOTHING like the real thing!
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Anjali Sinha (5/1/2009 12:23:00 AM)
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introspection is needed here
do we proceed or do we stop
so many friends here
dont know whom to choose
but then,
lets be happy
cos God has created us only for love
-10 anjali
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