Anne Unknown

Rookie (15-09-1995 / Den Helder, Netherlands)

Dark Room

My life is like a dark room,
For I do not see the light,
My pupils are wide though the light is on,
I feel alone almost always,
I feel alone even when others are near,
Only so often do I feel free of the darkness,
But who will save me when I am stuck in the dark room?
Who will be my savior?
Who will I show gratitude for as long as I may live?
I am still not sure if that person truly exists.

My life is like a dark room,
Thus I cannot find the lock,
I am held captive in the darkness,
Time does not excist for me,
It feels like I am falling,
falling in a bliss,
Whom will catch me when it feels like I am lost forever?
Who has the key to the lock?
Is it thou?
Arst thy my savior?
Who ever it is,
Rescue me, if you please.

Submitted: Tuesday, September 29, 2009
Edited: Monday, November 09, 2009

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  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (10/8/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    Who will catch me when it feels like I am lost forever?
    Whom has the key to the lock?
    Is it thou?
    a very sweet poem indeed..liked it very much and its quite impressive and done in good way..well done 10/10 (Report) Reply

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