thick forest
the stranger invited to bilberries
in the grove was many of it
with navy blue formed
the stain on green
you were afraid hearing wasps
dividing with hand of the shrub
he show the thick grass
soiled russet colour and they
everywhere there, was many of them
prepared for the attack
yes, you were afraid, you were afraid,
and the one, smiling and even
didn't help you saying only:
they will do nothing
when you are by me here
if some prick is it doesn't ache
in this grey tracksuit, walked on
sleeves, trouser legs
and grass and the tree
blown down lay on the path.
when you slowly came back
none of them touched you,
although still you shook them off
positively strange supposedly
he didn't defend you
and they didn't do harm
woken, for a moment you could still hear
enormous forest, and this strangest roar
and it is only a dream...
The life too is dream.There are voices that tell us that we would be hurt. But guardian angel is always there.And at last we wake to the enlightement, we find that all our troubles, cares, pain, joy was nothing but a dream.............good write.............
Very good poem, which will induce some people for getting acquainted with psychology (also of dreams) . What they want to tell us - what are marking. Among others our subconscious is associated with them.If we want exacly, diligently to describe them - even, in the poetic way, it it isn't possible to change their contents. Therefore not for everyone are understandable.Of course, 'strong symbols' are more visible and the quick and attentive reader will always catch them. Here, it is 'enormous forest and the strange roar' - what noticed Nasser Ahmed Nasir - and quite rightly. Also in Polish know the poem and I can see that in the English it isn't losing.I like it :) Dagmara Anna
The poem is a bit ambiguous but hearing enormous forest and the strange roar in a dream in December is very deep, profound and somewhat mystic. Regards Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A dreamy piece that flows in the winds of imgarey written lines, beautiful work