Dont Cry Poem by ajith patnaik

Dont Cry

Rating: 5.0


for every dropp you shed,
i feel as if drops of acid
are gently dropped over my heart.
it burns with pain,
but the pain that aches the most
is not because of the one inside me.
its the pain you go through that stabs me the most.
i see dark clouds gathering around me.
i wish to come to you and catch your tears
and see that they evapourate before
they come out of your gentle eyes.
i wonder sometimes why we are so far away.
but i do geel that if i 'd been with you,
i might have caught your hand.
but i could have never convinced
u that.....'I FEEL YOUR PAIN'
every part of my body point their
fingers at me and force me
to claim the responsibility for your misery.
when i was there to share your happiness,
its my duty to be there for your grief as well.
next time you cry, please remember that
you're not the only one suffering.
there is an other person here feeling your pain.
infact maybe a pinch more.
that another person is me.
please never cry again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
dr veenaa rai 07 August 2009

being there for ur loved one is love's first lesson...touching, sensitive, ...

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Winnie Angel 11 January 2009

nice and touching in its write!

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There is so much empathy in this poem for another and the words really spoke to my heart too. Well done! Karin Anderson

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 January 2009

don't cry when you don't have a tear to cry.Well writes Ajith.

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Miral El Nahry 10 January 2009

Bravo! ! That was one of the best poems i've read! ! Amazing words put in together. i give you a 10.

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