elysabeth faslund

Rookie (11/23/49 / Thibodaux. Louisiana)

Donuts - Poem by elysabeth faslund

Donuts in the morning
Donuts in the evening
Donuts at suppertime
Be my awful sugar

Coma, but I love you
All the time.
Put I.V.s around me
And swear by Krispy

You'll be there forever
In a sugar frosted dream!
Donuts are a danger
Donuts do a harm

But, I'll be there this
For another bag of
Warm, ooey, gooey

I.V. coma warning alarm!

Good Morning!

Comments about Donuts by elysabeth faslund

  • Rookie - 35 Points Robert Howard (12/8/2007 3:04:00 PM)

    Very sweet and greasy, my dear. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - -1 Points Ivan Donn Carswell (12/3/2007 2:17:00 PM)

    A compulsory fix and a huge lift! Love it (all the time) . Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (12/2/2007 4:16:00 PM)

    Hi Elysabeth! Funny after reading this i had to out and have a donut and coffee? *10*!
    Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gary Witt (12/2/2007 11:03:00 AM)

    Elysabeth: In the words of Homer Simpson, 'Ah, donuts...is there anything they can't do? '

    G (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 2, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 27, 2011

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