Dream Poem by Yannis Voultos

Dream

Rating: 4.6


I am sleeping
With the door open
In the sea
The indescribable.
A beauty
Much wilder
Even than the words of then.
Across
A span
To the island of eyeless poets

And I see
The poems
The ones of a tomb
Written in my mind
By the hands
Of the suicide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

Cute dream 10+

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a very well expressed poem..short and direct to the point..10++++

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Anjali Sinha 23 May 2009

what a dream to be written by the hands of suicide this poem has great depth lovely! ! !

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Gillian Commerford 28 December 2012

Quite haunting, sad and touching.I will read more of your poems.

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Goodness Tchibueze 28 December 2012

Good write...I love it.Kudos to you....

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Stephen W 28 December 2014

Odd, but I kind of like it, and I don't usually like odd poems. Perhaps it's just your English. Of course, you may be long gone from this site, or even this world. It's pathetic they don't bother to choose new poems of the day.

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Kim Barney 28 December 2014

Congrats on your poem being selected three years in a row as poem of the day for December 28!

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Babatunde Aremu 28 December 2014

Nice write! Kudos! ! I like the powerful of imagery. Keep on writing

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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 December 2014

Imagery implanted well to realise reader the death as a part of material life one spend. The expansion of abstract world resides within beauty, man yet not achieved its ultimate expression to expose its essence of eternity. Suicidal note most relevant utterance where personality feels undone to expose. Nice.

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Lyn Paul 28 December 2013

Hello Yannis congrats for making Poem of The Day, I enjoyed this and whilst reading it could see a painted picture of this dream, thought provoking words. Thank you

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