Dream Girl Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Dream Girl

Rating: 5.0


Keep her in your dreams,
with appealing streams,
with her cuts and curls,
with her diamonds and pearls,
with a day in her cheeks,
with a night in her peaks,
with roses in the lips,
her necks are the slips,
ahead are the hills,
a valley of thrills,
just dream and adore,
don't travel any more,
your dreams may be shaken,
your heart may be broken,
she will loose her charms,
keep closed your arms,
she is nice in dreams,
not in real streams,
keep her at a distance,
just feel her fragrance,
for inspiration and art,
keep her in your heart.

(An advice to my FB friend Noel Rai)

Monday, October 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 19 October 2015

Good advice to all young lovers. Thanks

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Khalid Saifullah 19 October 2015

A nice advice......................................

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2015

Superb rhyming, lovely imagery and great advice!

4 1 Reply
Kelly Kurt 19 October 2015

Many things seem desirable until you have them

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Musawir Raakh 19 October 2015

Great work of rhymes, cool 1

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2022

Sir, this is an endearing poem...Top score

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 September 2019

Keep her in your dreams, Keep her in your dreams, keep her in your heart. A nice love story.

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Bisma Mirza 09 November 2015

Very Nice onE! ! 10 on 10..................

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Saheb Mohapatra 24 October 2015

great piece of poetry with all the ingredients to make it soothing and sweet..............loved reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Thrilling expression. A beautiful love poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. - - 10

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