Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Dusk Comes Dancing


Clear and lucid the light
Of soft summer nights.
Gentle late breezes, right
On time float clouds, and bright
Re-arranged fiery red hues
Then produce diffused
Shades, yet waltzing them through
To dusk, they start to lose
Pace in darker blues.
Dancing with colour, nightfall
Creates magic. Do see it all.

Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009
Edited: Saturday, June 27, 2009

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  • Rookie Susan Jarvis (6/25/2009 5:16:00 AM)

    Some superb language at play in this colourful little poem. I love all the 'ooh' sounds - it conjures a feeling of all those wide eyes looking up at a firework display. S :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (6/19/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    You have successfully captured the blue magic of the dusk.,
    Beautiful write,10, for you.

    Love,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (6/17/2009 9:54:00 AM)

    The twilight hour a time to ponder
    gaze to the west where it lingers longer
    ionized air, a palate'd night
    Sheppard's watch with delight

    the glorious colours of dusk, beautifully portrayed Fay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (6/17/2009 1:57:00 AM)

    Another wonderful piece so elloquently painted by your hand Fay....beautiful....Fi 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (6/14/2009 11:19:00 PM)

    You use a fine pallet of light and color to explore this time of mystery and soft summer evenings. Your rhyming is unconventional and all the more enjoyable for that. A poem that is definitely recognizable as Fay Slimm's - and that's the truth. Bravo. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 930 Points Saadat Tahir (6/13/2009 6:32:00 AM)

    fay its a beauty

    good old simple straight poetry...laid back and cheerful

    great
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bob Gibson (6/13/2009 5:23:00 AM)

    Because i look to the east, i see only the dawn!
    but have seen through your eyes the dusk!
    i can see the setting sun in my imagination
    beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/12/2009 3:39:00 AM)

    Lovely and delightful poem with amazing imageries.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/12/2009 12:24:00 AM)

    a dailt sight though every day a new show..lovely your poem inspires (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Martyres (6/11/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful word flow that captures the the ambience of dusk very well...10 (Report) Reply

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