Elizabeth's Dreaming. Poem by Fay Slimm

Elizabeth's Dreaming.

Rating: 4.9


He entered the room and measured the crowd.

Ladies in bodiced profusion, high-styled
And primping.
..................Bawdy, the men laughed loudly.

She stood there alone,
........................turned and caught his smile.
Cream begowned, hair gleaming
.....................................dimpled delight
She, with young beauty
...................................needed no preening.

He proferred his hand,
..........................and they danced that night
.So began Lady Elizabeth's dreaming.

Soldiers, she knew, led a dangerous life,
But would she succumb
.................................and become his wife?

(To be Continued)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Now that I can see this is a serial, I will be drawn into this beautiful woman Elizabeth. And, I know you will write it so well with your womanly poetic touch! So far, I am intrigued but must go to the next episode....10 love Karin

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Carol Gall 24 August 2009

intriging conrtinue soon please

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Susan Jarvis 24 August 2009

An intriguing, titillating, potential bodice-ripper of a poem, Fay! Oh for the next installment! S ;)

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