Treasure Island

Elena Sandu


Empty pockets empty purse


Inside my pockets
the wind..
tries hard to play
an old game,
hide and seek
But then too bored,
not pleased enough
starts searching for
a playmate for the friend!
who does he find?
Just take a guess? ?
My purse, thats right!
The wind tries hard to
hook him up
and Mr Purse?
naahh...
Too lazy and too weak..
promises to play
actually starts but
then, just hide away and
sleep.
Sweet dreams, you clever
empty Mr Purse,
Sweet dreams! !

Submitted: Monday, March 15, 2010
Edited: Monday, June 10, 2013

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  • Ramesh Rai (7/24/2013 11:40:00 PM)

    With an empty purse only we can dream. we will get sound sleep and sweet dream. but with full purse we can not take even a nap. we can not shut our eye. beautiful write. thanks for sharing. keep sharing. regards. (Report) Reply

  • Stan Petrovich (10/19/2012 3:45:00 PM)

    I'm the melding of The Man With No Name (Clint Eastwood) with Johnny Cash - (The Man With No Cash) . But I'm not proud enough, as you aren't either, not to merely joke about it. (Report) Reply

  • Narayanan Ramakrishnan (3/14/2011 11:29:00 PM)

    I really liked this one. Your contemplation and effective presentation makes reading a plesant experience. Keep going. Narayanan. (Report) Reply

  • Chris Jibero (7/27/2010 5:34:00 AM)

    I like the imagery and the ambience of the poem.Empty pocket is a close relation of empty
    purse or, better still, one in an unholy wedlock.Do read read these my poems: 'Money' and 'Treasure'.Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (4/4/2010 4:53:00 AM)

    Sweet dreams not only empty your purse
    For them you sacrifice the whole universe.
    CP (Report) Reply

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