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End of Existence

A breathing bud of life
Lived inside her womb,
Waiting to take a plunge
Into the beautiful crooked world,
In the broad shining daylight.
The closed eyes and the kicks
Made her turn crimson red,
As she blushed feeling shy,
Expressing her eternal glee,
With happy tears as she shed.
Times moved on
As the sharp social claws,
Pounced on the maiden,
And she screamed and cried,
To save the heartbeats inside
But all in vain!
The blood flowing on the floor
Announced the annihilation of existence,
As the budding seed and the lass
Were not there to smile anymore!

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

Submitted: Monday, September 17, 2012
Edited: Monday, September 17, 2012


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  • Vizard Dhawan (12/6/2012 2:26:00 AM)

    what a nice piece of works...great write...really liked ur poem vry much

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  • Ramesh Rai (11/15/2012 4:39:00 AM)

    Touched my heart for its existence. quite narrative and beautifully written. great write. I do feel the blood flowing on the floor announcing annihilation of existence, crying for life.

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  • Rebecca Adams (11/13/2012 11:22:00 PM)

    Your descriptions are vidid and imaginative.
    taking the unseen and turning it into a picture.
    Sad and a little dark but shows both the joy of new life and sadness at the end of life

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  • Vivek Tiwari (11/7/2012 11:53:00 PM)

    A new life to heir the parents.

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  • Karen Sinclair (11/6/2012 2:55:00 AM)

    beautiful crooked world....sharp social claws... i love these descriptions... i think this is beautiful as it expresses such a delicate flower too gentle for this place

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  • Yash Shinde (10/27/2012 3:53:00 AM)

    very insightful.very powerful and deep..great imagery wonderful expressions of vivid colours.........everything beautifully embedded in crimson curtains of blood and emotions..loved it :)

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  • Rumi Roy (10/27/2012 1:33:00 AM)

    A poem which highlights one of the most horrible curses of mankind. No words to express my appreciation. Pray this ends forever.

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  • M.d Dinesh Nair (10/19/2012 9:31:00 AM)

    Painfully beautiful dear poet... The narration descends straight on the mind and every reader is thrown into a gloom of its kind. Helpless we remain at these excesses on the colossal denial of an existence. A fine write indeed.

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  • Deci Hernandez (10/3/2012 4:38:00 PM)

    Sharp social claws. and i wondered why roses are red. beautiful piece. also i wonder why social claws are appealing.

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  • Medua2105@yahoo.com Osamedua (10/3/2012 1:03:00 PM)

    Beautifully thought out. I like the arrangement and choice of words. Nice piece indeed! . Keep the ink flowing! !

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