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Marieta Maglas (6/10/2009 9:21:00 AM)
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Aristotle argues that time manifest itself in the change of things but the change itself is not
time:
“So time is either change or some aspect of change; and since it is not change, it must be
some aspect of change”
By expressing the concept of time and by using conceptual metaphors, eg
'What is existing or non-existing
nothing can be shared ''
and cognitive metaphors, eg
''Sorrow is a small virus dark blue
spreading spores into my blood''
and visual metaphors, eg
''I’m a tree beside the street
and time is walking in front of me ''
the poet needs to prove that time can mean, in some conditions a change in itself..
genial poem...10++
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Brishti Mazumdar (6/8/2009 10:54:00 AM)
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Again an enviable thought process...yet here a bit torn amongst ideas...yet 10++ for your unique way of thinking....Brishti
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Raj Nandy (5/16/2009 12:39:00 PM)
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While reading this poem I felt that I was sitting inside the 'Time Machine' of HG
Wells and the control stick in fast forward motion....! 10+
-Raj Nandy
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rago rago (5/16/2009 10:10:00 AM)
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yes we are loosing pockets, wallots and every thing.........nicely penned..........
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Ruslan Kerimov (10/7/2008 4:18:00 AM)
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A great write! Very sharp and impressive allegories and metaphors. Definitely 10 for it.
With all sincerity
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palas kumar ray (10/4/2008 1:49:00 PM)
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The endlessness of Time and our short existance in it is marvelously expressed as contrast in your poem.This is again I should complement as the poem of 21 st Century engraved on it.
10+++++++++
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Pacific Hernandez (10/2/2008 2:39:00 AM)
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A very good poem. Well written. 10 for this.
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Yuri Duraan (9/21/2008 1:21:00 PM)
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Your poem reads like a movie scene, continuous... flowing, with really moving music in the background.... you write really well and it is way beyond time for me to give you this compliment.
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rohit sapra (9/21/2008 11:45:00 AM)
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Life is a continuous process in which loss and gain is the process as realizations occur when a loss occurs. This poem is full of deep thinking. In this poem the way you have compared things is also really very interesting.
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Shimon Weinroth (9/20/2008 11:50:00 AM)
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a good poem should be read more than once
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