Vizard Dhawan


Eyes Are Real - Poem by Vizard Dhawan

her bold shameful eyes
looks better when she shys
I want to be in her
wishing GOD for it to occur
I live in her eyes
as she dreams I sleep
the two classy eyes
behind the spectacles
I see them
without any obestacles
seeing her eyes
you forget to memorise
thus bold shameful eyes
looks better when she shys


Comments about Eyes Are Real by Vizard Dhawan

  • Rookie Masarapu Navyasree (12/4/2012 1:11:00 AM)

    very nice writing.so sweet (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Masarapu Navyasree (12/4/2012 1:11:00 AM)

    very nice writing.so sweet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 143 Points Indranil Bhaduri (12/3/2012 10:42:00 PM)

    Fantastic writing...keep it up, need more... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,713 Points * Sunprincess * (12/3/2012 10:34:00 PM)

    the eyes are the windows to the soul..
    you have penned an excellent poem..congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (12/3/2012 9:33:00 PM)

    Oh this one is so sweet....and what gets me is the fact that you dont care about her glassess as it should be...beauty is held within the eyes of the beholder...hmmm is that right...smiles...loved this one (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,917 Points Hazel Durham (12/3/2012 4:37:00 AM)

    Nice poem, if you don't mind me saying you would need to spend more time editing your poem, very promising! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 2, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, December 3, 2012


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