Vivek Tiwari

Rookie - 98 Points (23 July 1985 / Gaura (R.S.) Pratapgarh)

Faith Betrayed: The Sale Of Love - Poem by Vivek Tiwari

Jimmy calmed my heart in deep depression
A balm or physic for sorrow's ceasation
While I was alone
With all my hopes in deep despair
My world has all my mother's care
Father and brothers
All climbed early on death's stair!
Jimmy's affection so fonded me
I couldn'd escape a love in he!
He too confessed and promised his love
My pleasure to him flew as a dove!


Devoted to him
My being love bound
He was my angel
My hope profound!
He wished with me
To dine a day
Enjoying a hotel or a distant cafe.

How could I deny his longings
A pleasure such as soul's wedding?

I put my labour and leisure away
To cheer my love
My love a day.
All my way my love he fired
His sparkling eyes me blushed and inspired
Brought me far-far away from there
In a large hotel as grand
We sat together in a lonely room
Together we sat hand in hand.
His cheeks looked worm
And dried lips
I kissed them soft
To meet his bliss
Eyes sportive as playing some trick!
Right them appeared a stranger
And maliciousily uttered 'well you done
Good piece choosen of many diamonds
Now take your price full fifty thousands! `
I was knocked in bed in fear
To be ravished for demons' fun.
Jimmy parted with malice smile
Said, 'Darling thanks well paid'
And waved bye-bye!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is about how the innocent girls are betrayed and their faith and feeling all are ravished and crushed and the devils profit upon by making the Sale of love.

Comments about Faith Betrayed: The Sale Of Love by Vivek Tiwari

  • Veteran Poet - 1,093 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/12/2013 11:04:00 AM)

    Excellent write... using of word is too good....nicely done... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Titi Dale (1/10/2013 3:26:00 PM)

    How amazing! Good use of words, where did the name Jimmy come from?
    A great write, and o keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Valerie Dohren (1/10/2013 1:52:00 PM)

    A dreadful situation very well described. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,625 Points Neela Nath (1/10/2013 11:15:00 AM)

    Girls should be alert of this kind of fraud! It is going on everywhere. The title is very apt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (1/10/2013 8:08:00 AM)

    An eternal woe of the seasons well captured and the deep concerns well expressed.The merchants of innocent girls will be made accountable once. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 14, 2013


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