Fanastic Day Poem by Christina Phan

Fanastic Day

Rating: 5.0


In first time of my life, I have a
Fanastic Day
First, I got tickets to my favorite band that I won it on radio show
Next, I got my guy
At end of my date, it turn out perfect
He makes us a picnic and we are on a boat
It was night time with a beautiful moon out
He put on nice music
The most perfect time was when he kiss me
I feel like I have luck of Irish
I can't be any happier
He surprised me by asking me if I want be his girlfriend
I say yes and I couldn't ask for more
I feel so lucky and this a
Fanastic Day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Tanwar 18 July 2009

all your poems are beautiful... you should try writing the lyrics for the song.. cause your style of writing is more like songs...

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Vijay Sai R 14 July 2009

fantastic expression of events....all happier

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~ Jon London ~ 12 July 2009

Certainly a blessed day Christina my friend....It's days like this that make the heart glow with happiness........well penned 10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 July 2009

Yes it was really a fantastic day and I wish you having many many fantastic days, like this one, in your coming life.

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Christina Phan

Christina Phan

San Jose, Califorina
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