Min Sia


Fear - Poem by Min Sia

This coldness tortures me
This melancholy oppresses me
This silence kills me
I can't cry
I can't laugh
Am I locked?
This darkness ruptures me
This dissonance inside me
Is there any one out there?
Am I too lost?
There's no wind whistling
No murmurs of the night
I'm blinded by these tears
And I can't stop the pain
Let me go
Let me be free
Let me hold my last breath
And change this soul within
For I'm dying here tonight
And all is unwritten


Comments about Fear by Min Sia

  • (11/30/2008 9:16:00 AM)


    Very wonderfully penned poem with nice imagery.
    Liked it.
    U get 10++.............
    Love & hugs...........
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  • (11/28/2008 5:18:00 PM)


    Sharp and penetrating. The presentation in groups of 3 is very effective. You pick things that really can hurt: coldness, melancholy, and silence. Well done. Ben (Report) Reply

  • (11/26/2008 4:33:00 AM)


    thinking of dearh we continue to live...and thinking of life we continue to die...a good write letting out the inside conflicts... strong and deep...10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/25/2008 10:36:00 PM)


    M ay you be assured,
    i n this world many live
    n urturing fear within.

    S eek courage from the Lord,
    i n surpassing
    a ll fears in your heart, my friend!
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  • (11/25/2008 8:29:00 AM)


    A very well written piece about being afraid,
    Well done
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • premji premji (11/25/2008 5:00:00 AM)


    real torment...
    you pour it as poetry
    well done
    10+++
    please read my poem 'the world'
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  • Allen Steble (11/24/2008 5:31:00 AM)


    everyone experiences fear, some worse than others, most if not all poets have written about this subject at some time or anothere and it can be hard to express true feeling about fear, one of the best pieces of advice i was told is to use fear to your advantage, harness it and let it move you forward rather than back, nicely expressed poem and dont forget to smile, it may not always feel the best but its for the best :) (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (11/22/2008 4:15:00 AM)


    These inner fears of unknown origin trouble us. I think u read my poem'mydark nights'. Let us laugh them all. (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2008 1:59:00 AM)


    full of feelings, but i advise you to laugh more as it helps (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2008 6:25:00 AM)


    Fear entwined with my tears
    jeers at my desires and hopes,
    Only God can free me from this
    suffocating rope.
    Good right.......
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  • (11/17/2008 5:15:00 AM)


    a deep thoughts. certainly where we go..from ashes we came to ashes we go..
    a provoking toughts..great write..A10

    Ency Bearis
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  • (11/16/2008 6:28:00 PM)


    there is always light to be found at the end...I like the contained emotions in this one...nice work (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (11/16/2008 10:34:00 AM)


    Well depicted pain and agony.......good symmetry. (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2008 9:45:00 AM)


    Wow, you really supressed yourself on this one! ! Well done. (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2008 9:42:00 AM)


    'For I'm dying here tonight'
    Hey Min Sia-----the fear that I gonna lose you
    is worrying me.
    nice write -fulll of pathos
    ++10 regards anju

    '
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  • (11/16/2008 7:57:00 AM)


    Fear of losing love is like total darkness.............a solitary confinement.nicely done Min. (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2008 7:50:00 AM)


    good....a well written piece....truly looking experienced! ! ...10+ (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (11/16/2008 7:21:00 AM)


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    Well penned...........happens when fear takes over.
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (11/16/2008 7:05:00 AM)


    Feelings penned well.........10+ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 16, 2008



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