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Min Sia


Fear


This coldness tortures me
This melancholy oppresses me
This silence kills me
I can't cry
I can't laugh
Am I locked?
This darkness ruptures me
This dissonance inside me
Is there any one out there?
Am I too lost?
There's no wind whistling
No murmurs of the night
I'm blinded by these tears
And I can't stop the pain
Let me go
Let me be free
Let me hold my last breath
And change this soul within
For I'm dying here tonight
And all is unwritten

Submitted: Sunday, November 16, 2008

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Gargi Saha (11/30/2008 9:16:00 AM)

    Very wonderfully penned poem with nice imagery.
    Liked it.
    U get 10++.............
    Love & hugs........... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ben Gieske (11/28/2008 5:18:00 PM)

    Sharp and penetrating. The presentation in groups of 3 is very effective. You pick things that really can hurt: coldness, melancholy, and silence. Well done. Ben (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kesav Easwaran (11/26/2008 4:33:00 AM)

    thinking of dearh we continue to live...and thinking of life we continue to die...a good write letting out the inside conflicts... strong and deep...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points marvin brato (11/25/2008 10:36:00 PM)

    M ay you be assured,
    i n this world many live
    n urturing fear within.

    S eek courage from the Lord,
    i n surpassing
    a ll fears in your heart, my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie premji premji (11/25/2008 5:00:00 AM)

    real torment...
    you pour it as poetry
    well done
    10+++
    please read my poem 'the world' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (11/24/2008 5:31:00 AM)

    everyone experiences fear, some worse than others, most if not all poets have written about this subject at some time or anothere and it can be hard to express true feeling about fear, one of the best pieces of advice i was told is to use fear to your advantage, harness it and let it move you forward rather than back, nicely expressed poem and dont forget to smile, it may not always feel the best but its for the best :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (11/17/2008 6:25:00 AM)

    Fear entwined with my tears
    jeers at my desires and hopes,
    Only God can free me from this
    suffocating rope.
    Good right....... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 254 Points Ency Bearis (11/17/2008 5:15:00 AM)

    a deep thoughts. certainly where we go..from ashes we came to ashes we go..
    a provoking toughts..great write..A10

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Viola Grey (11/16/2008 6:28:00 PM)

    there is always light to be found at the end...I like the contained emotions in this one...nice work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anjali Sinha (11/16/2008 9:42:00 AM)

    'For I'm dying here tonight'
    Hey Min Sia-----the fear that I gonna lose you
    is worrying me.
    nice write -fulll of pathos
    ++10 regards anju

    ' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nia Riz (11/16/2008 7:50:00 AM)

    good....a well written piece....truly looking experienced! ! ...10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 183 Points Palas Kumar Ray (11/16/2008 7:21:00 AM)

    _________________________________________
    Well penned...........happens when fear takes over.
    __________________________________________ (Report) Reply

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