Min Sia


I Love You - Poem by Min Sia

I love you..there's no reason
As the sky kissed the land
As the sun and moon held each hand
As the bee disposed his honey
As the sea immobilized by fear
You held me in your arms
Until blood runs out of time
You kissed me so that my lips gone burnt
You dressed me that my soul opened windows
You fed me that my stomach released poison
You bathed me with an acid
With your palms of fangs of death
Your embrace like silver
The heat of cold river
Swing me high and low
Rope at my neck and below
You laid me in your bed
Below 6feet bended

I love you...
And all I can think of...
To have you kidnapped
Drag to a place of nobody
Kiss you with lips full of honey
Dress you like golden prince
Feed you with chocolates and candies
Bathe you with herbs and scents
Lay you upon my bed of roses
Embrace you with the stars committed

I've given you all my material world
You've opened my gate to the other world
To feed this hunger burning inside me
Yet, I give you light for you to seek
Your hands and feet will be shed with blood
Metals and flesh intertwined
Stalactite and stalagmite all around
Trapping sins and echoes outside
Holding your head with mine
As the Earth takes its time

For I love you truly
You and me, forever be...


Comments about I Love You by Min Sia

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rachel Ann Butler (9/19/2009 3:57:00 PM)

    Kiss you with lips full of honey

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  • Rookie - 12 Points premji premji (3/13/2009 2:09:00 AM)

    dear min,
    you prove: love means sacrifice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pink Butterfly ... (1/15/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    Lovely to read! Very romantic.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Little Morning Star (1/4/2009 9:34:00 PM)

    love poems are always impressed me, so is this poem..
    really nice work.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naru Kaede (12/6/2008 10:58:00 AM)

    Wowwww, , , so dark...
    I would rather put Wikan in the jail for my revenge...
    And make him suffer with hanging him in the wall... (So mean)
    But this is truly a beautiful revenge... ellegance I mean...
    Because you revenge it in to a word... beautiful word...

    I love ittt...! ! ! It's already in my poemlist! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (12/1/2008 8:44:00 AM)

    Great write Min, love expressed vividly with great emotion and imagery, a great sentiment keep writing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Serkan Sürer (11/30/2008 5:22:00 AM)

    I love you...simple but powerful.you know how to tell your feelings.cause it really impressed me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mine Yours (11/14/2008 6:23:00 AM)

    ! ! ! ! ! !
    very spirited and strong minded (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (11/13/2008 3:17:00 PM)

    WOW - has a lot of passion (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nia Riz (11/13/2008 9:53:00 AM)

    beauitiful...m rating it 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 423 Points Ency Bearis (11/13/2008 3:17:00 AM)

    enchanting poem..eloquent verses of love well narrated..lovely..A10

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tia Maria (11/13/2008 2:35:00 AM)

    Excellent & passionate portrayal of those wild emotions that can come with love or lust. Well written Min :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hazem Al Jaber (11/13/2008 2:08:00 AM)

    words are clearly showed the love which you hide and keep inside your heart for whom you love..
    its a pretty amazing..
    keep up a good write..
    thx for sharing..
    hazem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 13, 2008



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