Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 25 Points (26/05/1989)

Feelings - Poem by Jinal Oswal

There are many sentences which the mouth cannot convey…
There are many messages which neither of the services can deliver…
There are many words which are not expressed when seriously needed…
There are many actions which are not promoted in the right way…
But, There are times when inspite of these drawbacks it's "You" who shines.


Comments about Feelings by Jinal Oswal

  • Rookie Barbara Nixon (3/8/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    Great write, very insightful, beautiful. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,515 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/8/2014 12:44:00 AM)

    congrats on being poem of the day... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,515 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/8/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    Quite a thought-provoking poem...Because of inertia, words and statements do not often move as fast as they should...something always gets stuck... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Leslie Philibert (3/8/2013 1:25:00 PM)

    OK, not bad, but nothing too great (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/8/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    It is You who shines. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,554 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/8/2013 5:53:00 AM)

    Sometimes I, we, you us just exhude and eminate without anything needing to be said or done.
    Thought provoking write. Thank you :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,921 Points Babatunde Aremu (3/8/2013 2:55:00 AM)

    Great write. This is is true to all (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/8/2013 12:51:00 AM)

    Jinal i was intrigued by the last line of your poem, pardon my ignorance, but who is the you, is it you, or the you which wants to leap out, is it the other, or are you reffering to god? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Sahil Sood (11/17/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    a beautiful write.. A true fact, just luvd reading it.. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,753 Points Wahab Abdul (3/8/2012 7:59:00 PM)

    A VERY GOOD POEM, WELL CONCEIVED IDEA, AND ABOVE ALL WELL SAID, I LIKE IT, PLEASE READ ''A LIAR'' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (12/21/2011 11:48:00 AM)

    Hi... What a beautiful poem! Expressing exactly my feelings I can't express lately. I knew I'd get the right words from someone, no surprice it was from you... Thank you... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 205 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (12/18/2011 8:19:00 AM)

    brilliant write, i really love it........... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,781 Points Dave Walker (12/15/2011 3:19:00 AM)

    Really like this. Sometimes words just don't come out.
    A great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonali Sings (12/9/2011 8:31:00 AM)

    It's a matter of expressed or unexpressed feelings..Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 174 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/9/2011 5:27:00 AM)

    [Feelings are sometimes precious]
    A g'd poem! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 9, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, March 5, 2012


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