Five Liner- King Fisher Poem by Valsa George

Five Liner- King Fisher

Rating: 5.0


A king fisher swooped down
Over the silent lake
A flash of amber and blue
Bobbed up with a sloshing silver fish
Dangling from its beak like an ornate pendant

Five Liner- King Fisher
Monday, February 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: bird
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 15 February 2016

A powerful five-liner that weighs more than a long poem. Descriptive writing is definitely your forte. Another marvel of a poem.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 February 2016

If we have that amount of peace in mind and the patience to admire little little things in nature, what a remedy they would be to ailing minds and hearts. Your sweet five liner clearly demonstrates how to do that. Mind you, only poets and artists can do this. Thank you for sharing.x

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Abhilasha Bhatt 16 February 2016

Sometimes few words works more than a full book.....nice one.....thank you for sharing :)

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Kelly Kurt 16 February 2016

An image flashed through my mind as I read each perfectly placed word

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Kavya . 17 February 2016

the caption caught my attention - wonderful poem with beautiful picturesque

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Robert Murray Smith 10 July 2018

Beautifully penned.- - - -+10

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Akhtar Jawad 05 June 2018

a hunting so nicely described in beautiful words and lines.

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M Asim Nehal 19 February 2016

Wow so well written.......Poem and snap shot is complement to each other.

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Rajesh Thankappan 19 February 2016

A brilliant picture of the bird swooping down and picking up the fish flashes through our mind on reading the poem and there is no need for any pictorial depiction.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 17 February 2016

You captured the instant more beautifully than the picture.

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