Five Liners.14. Nuptial Ceremony Poem by Valsa George

What can be so beautiful beneath the canopy of blue sky and beside waves of blue sea pleasing to the ear and pleasing to the eye of a nuptial so eternal......Valsa.....beautifully composed with beautiful words

A lovely description of the nature's amazing beauty being said so eloquently! !

Personifying the regal rocks as a groom and the waves as a bride with joy blended with shyness and the breaks of the sea as a beats of music below the canopy of sky, Valsa you have painted the picture of this marriage so beautifully, I wish I would be a rock but wait (if you don't mind) subject to the condition that delicious dishes would be served.

Sorry I mistook the garland as the bride, it's my old habit,

Being close to the ever waving sea you see the glorious union again and again. Beautifully presented in the poem. Thank you.

What an excellent imagery! One of the best and most romantic places to hold a matrimony is near the sea. The sea, waves and the sky are just amazing scenes that enhance the beauty of the mass wedding. Beautifully crafted and well expressed poem.

A pleasant expression has been made on a metaphorical base. A beautiful poem where the waves garlanded the regal rocks in coy mirth. Thanks for sharing.10

Now that's a wedding ceremony! And that's a great succinct poem of celebration!

i don't understand my earlier comment! i must have been in a BIG hurry to eat. ok, with help from some other comments and some personal reflection, i am now thinking the use of mass nuptial ceremony was symbolic of the scene of waves covering rocks with garlands, as may happen in India and Hawaii during marriage ceremonies. i never got nor gave a garland in any of my four marriage ceremonies. did YOU? ! this shorty goes to my/our June 2017 showcase, featuring over 20 poems in June, by over 20 'female' poets. Thanks. bri :) looking at my earlier comment AGAIN, it seems i understood the symbolism a year ago! maybe i'm dumber now?

thank goodness for short poems! supper is almost ready, i feel. cool comparison: rocks to bride and groom. :) bri