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Five Liners.no.6. Hey, Forest Nymphs!

I watch the feathered beauties of ravishing plumes
Flying from tree to tree making shrill calls
How I wish I could catch these birds
The lovely deities of the woody groves
To cage their loveliness and melody to own for myself

Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014
Edited: Saturday, January 25, 2014


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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/13/2014 9:20:00 AM)

    Caged or not, you have successfully captured the ' lovely deities of the woody groves', 'the feathered beauties of ravishing plumes' in your poem, that will remain a forever beauty.
    What you wanted to own for yourself, their 'loveliness and melody', is now there for your readers to own. Great poem.

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  • Diane Hine (2/13/2014 5:36:00 AM)

    If we were granted that wish, how would we remember the experience? - fascinating.

  • Muhammad Ali (2/3/2014 1:01:00 AM)

    A wish or a desire or a dream that contains pure life is the real beauty of this short poem. Nice

  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/30/2014 10:28:00 AM)

    Very divinely and soul-stirring...........Valsa......I am mesmerised...............

  • Anthony Di''anno (1/26/2014 3:28:00 AM)

    Ooh Valsa, surely you would be unable to sit in peace knowing you keep beauty in a cage? Surely these nymphs should roam as free as your beautiful poetry?

  • Kanav Justa (1/26/2014 3:15:00 AM)

    , , , , you have already captured the lovely deities in your heart, , , wonderful poem...

  • Md Asadullah (1/26/2014 2:17:00 AM)

    You couldn't capture birds, but you have certainly captured the beautiful scene in your poem.

  • * Sunprincess * (1/25/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    ......to capture beauty is everyone's desire...a wonderful write..

  • Savita Tyagi (1/25/2014 4:31:00 PM)

    Lovely five liners. Those birds truly creat a longing for possession but their songs are always free for us.

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/25/2014 12:06:00 PM)

    To cage their loveliness and melody to own for myself
    Nice thought. Do not cage the birds cage their loveliness and melody. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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