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Valsa George


Five Liners.no.5. A Slice of Nature


She fixed the canvas on the easel
Her imagination bled into colors deep
Her brush moved along the surface
With a flurry of strokes, images came alive
A slice of Nature animated with man and beasts!

Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014
Edited: Saturday, January 25, 2014

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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/11/2014 9:06:00 PM)

    How beautifully you have goaded our imagination to 'capture a slice of nature' with your five liner, on 'her easel and canvas'! And wow, what a fantastic impression you gave through these words: 'Her imagination bled into colors deep'
    With just five lines, a complete picture came alive, just as you said: 'With a flurry of strokes, images came alive'.
    Marvelous! 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (2/13/2014 5:40:00 AM)

    Fixing a perfect moment or embellishing an imperfect one - it would be great to have that skill. (Report) Reply

  • Marie Shine (1/31/2014 2:32:00 AM)

    Wow! There is no better artist than Mother Nature and you have paid a very beautiful tribute to her in this excellently inked poem, dear Valsa. Exquisite penmanship in this superb poetic gem! Thank you for sharing. Blessings always... (Report) Reply

  • Kee Thampi (1/27/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    beauty in lines
    Her brush moved along the surface
    With a flurry of strokes, images came alive (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (1/25/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    Wow... beautiful moments captured in canvas. I just wondered if really the images came out alive from canvas....Then I will paint something lovely and inspiring ones only...Loved it... (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (1/24/2014 11:09:00 AM)

    When she gets many such slices readied on that canvas, the bounteous nature will itself be visible to the world. A fine five liner poem from you, Madam Valsa. (Report) Reply

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