Valsa George


Five Liners.No.5. A Slice Of Nature - Poem by Valsa George

She fixed the canvas on the easel
Her imagination bled into colors deep
Her brush moved along the surface
With a flurry of strokes, images came alive
A slice of Nature animated with man and beasts!


Comments about Five Liners.No.5. A Slice Of Nature by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 7,708 Points Khairul Ahsan (3/11/2014 9:06:00 PM)

    How beautifully you have goaded our imagination to 'capture a slice of nature' with your five liner, on 'her easel and canvas'! And wow, what a fantastic impression you gave through these words: 'Her imagination bled into colors deep'
    With just five lines, a complete picture came alive, just as you said: 'With a flurry of strokes, images came alive'.
    Marvelous! 10/10. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,735 Points Diane Hine (2/13/2014 5:40:00 AM)

    Fixing a perfect moment or embellishing an imperfect one - it would be great to have that skill. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,534 Points Amitava Sur (2/5/2014 1:23:00 AM)

    A lovely detailing of nature through this imagery as a painter... so nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Muhammad Ali (2/3/2014 1:05:00 AM)

    A five liner, not less than what she paint. And here the suspense is also added. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Marie Shine (1/31/2014 2:32:00 AM)

    Wow! There is no better artist than Mother Nature and you have paid a very beautiful tribute to her in this excellently inked poem, dear Valsa. Exquisite penmanship in this superb poetic gem! Thank you for sharing. Blessings always... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,053 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/27/2014 11:44:00 PM)

    Beautifully depicted Nature on canvas so lively and vibrant...............Valsa............. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,971 Points Kee Thampi (1/27/2014 12:33:00 AM)

    beauty in lines
    Her brush moved along the surface
    With a flurry of strokes, images came alive (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,601 Points Md Asadullah (1/26/2014 2:09:00 AM)

    I can see a slice of Nature in this five liner :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,954 Points * Sunprincess * (1/25/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    ......it's beautiful and so vivid... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,516 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/25/2014 12:07:00 PM)

    Capture a slice of nature on canvas with a stroke of brush. Beautiful five liner. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/25/2014 10:49:00 AM)

    Wow... beautiful moments captured in canvas. I just wondered if really the images came out alive from canvas....Then I will paint something lovely and inspiring ones only...Loved it... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/25/2014 12:26:00 AM)

    the metamorphosis poignantly captured! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (1/24/2014 11:09:00 AM)

    When she gets many such slices readied on that canvas, the bounteous nature will itself be visible to the world. A fine five liner poem from you, Madam Valsa. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 25, 2014


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