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Forbidden Fruit

My Guru forbade me
To touch you, ever!
But I was allowed to
See you, talk to you,
Stand close to you,
Less any maneuver.

So did I do, got close to you
And talked my heart out.
Didn't touch you,
Though I wanted to,
As you kept smiling at me
All throughout.

My Guru forbade me
To come near you and
Stand close.
But he gave me an allowance
Of just a yard's distance,
From nose to nose.

I was still much happy
As I could communicate
Audibly and visually.
But my Guru was not willing
To allow a romance so thrilling
To go on indefinitely.

Finally, my Guru forbade me
To be in your proximity,
Even to see you from afar.
So in my dreams I started
Seeing you as I wanted,
With no Guru standing near.

Submitted: Sunday, February 02, 2014
Edited: Sunday, February 02, 2014


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Durmut, Melandaha
Jamalpur, Bangladesh.

02 February 2014
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Comments about this poem (Come Home Darling by Khairul Ahsan )

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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/19/2014 9:24:00 AM)

    @Violet Winters
    I really liked your thoughtful words, so beautifully spoken!
    I am glad to know you liked my poem. I am truly inspired.

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  • Violet Winters (3/19/2014 8:07:00 AM)

    Now, this I really liked! Benign defiance... always better to ask forgiveness than permission and love is always a forgiveable offense.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/24/2014 6:36:00 AM)

    @ Amitava Sur
    Thank you very much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts. Yes, grooming is very important in one's life. You've rightly said so.

  • Amitava Sur (2/24/2014 12:23:00 AM)

    A nice penning expressing the state of conscience. Khairul - personally I believe... that person is fortunate enough who is properly groomed. This grooming itself guides a person to build his/her conscience.
    Ultimately...... you are the Lord, you are the slave of you yourself

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/22/2014 10:27:00 PM)

    @Lorraine Colon,
    Thanks for reading my poem.
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
    Thanks for interpreting the poem so aptly.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/22/2014 3:22:00 AM)

    @Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi,
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts on my poem. I agree to what you've said here.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/22/2014 1:49:00 AM)

    @Valsa George,
    I am grateful to you for reading my poem so minutely and interpreting the lines so aptly. I fully subscribe to your thoughts, thanks for sharing.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/19/2014 12:48:00 PM)

    @ Aqua Flower,
    Thanks for appreciating my poem, and leaving your thoughtful words, to which I agree.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/19/2014 9:46:00 AM)

    @Jasbir Chatterjee
    Thank you very much for your compliments on my poem and sharing your thoughts. Your comment is true- no one can disagree with you.

  • Khairul Ahsan (2/18/2014 9:07:00 PM)

    @ Marie Shine
    I cannot thank you enough for the wonderful compliments you have honoured me with. You have a unique ability to interpret a poem exactly as its author would like to do. 'though forbidden to even be in the proximity of your beloved, you were together in your dreams, where nobody had power over you.' - Exactly so!

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