Fragrance Of Love. Poem by Fay Slimm

Fragrance Of Love.

Rating: 5.0


Loves dances it's way in my heart, smelling
Of roses, the sweetest strong old bushrose,
Which, inhaling, takes away breath, and tells
A musk-tale of hot summer nights, imposing
Indelible scents in my mind. - - - - Apart
We may be, and distanced more by the sea
But wafting aroma of love, barters
It's strongly perfumed rosyness to me
In exchange for my soul. Take it sweetheart,
I don't need to tell you it's yours, others
Have offered me make-believe love, but part
Company - - - when I never discover
The fragrance of roses among their words.
Should that emit from the core, love can occur.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Sie 05 April 2009

Flowers expressed in a true love, form the perfume of bliss...how lovely is this poem...10++

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Fiona Davidson 05 April 2009

Beautiful romantic write Fay...your words simply flow through to the end conclusion....wonderful....Fi 10++++

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magnificent piece, again.. you never cease to amaze.

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Ency Bearis 05 April 2009

awesome poem..very suggestive write...nice

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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