Treasure Island

Kelvin Owusu

(15-10-1988 / Ghana)

Friends, Love, Life


In all honesty, you are beautiful
Despite the backlash
Between the mind and that beating drum
Slipped, tripped, fell in
That four letter word
Caved in,
A world of a word which I don't understand
A dramatic change of feelings
Agonizing pain of lovely memories
A friendship changed,
Through the cause of one word
Between two others

To say she's beautiful
Is an understatement
She's beyond a bond
My life's blood
Resonates through her veins
The combination of hers and mine
One, breath of her breath
A life created by tango
Two, a strong kick, healthy
A joy, shown through a teary smile
Not heaven sent but heaven itself

Submitted: Monday, October 29, 2012
Edited: Monday, October 29, 2012

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  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (11/10/2012 1:49:00 PM)

    Nice way of putting that one loves is like being confronted with heaven itself. Nice way of putting this idea across. Great lines. (Report) Reply

  • Aung Si (11/1/2012 12:40:00 AM)

    very nice poem! beautifully written! keep it up!
    my vote is 7.Enjoyed it (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (10/31/2012 11:43:00 AM)

    real or the true lovers are the ones who their souls have joined together in a body.and can not be fallen apart by words.
    nicely piece of written.10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson (10/31/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    Friends all over the world....yeah, it's also strange for me(I mean the lines: A dramatic change of feelings
    Agonizing pain of lovely memories
    A friendship changed,
    Through the cause of one word
    Between two others
    Still it's a mystery for me that how a word can ruin a relation between two friends those were close to each other for years?
    a great work
    well done (Report) Reply

  • Stevie Taite (10/29/2012 9:16:00 AM)

    Kevin, this may be my favourite so far! Especially the last stanza! The discovery of your new felt bond, and joy described beautifully. Perfect! (Report) Reply

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