Future >>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Future >>>

Rating: 5.0


oh she come with a jug
of fresh water from well
wetting her dress bare
to see shape of her beauty
silhouette by rising sun
I gasp with total admiration
I want to carry her load

she pour me a cup for thirst
after hours of farm toiling
so early start; sun's sleeping
she could have been resting
so nice seeing her now; then
cooking, washing and cleaning
she go to school after work
to find better work; living

Sunday, December 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle,patience,work
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 06 December 2015

Great imagery and nice poem on lifestyle. When u fall in love things looks different...Nice one 10

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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