Gigantic Is Lonliness. Poem by Fay Slimm

Gigantic Is Lonliness.

Rating: 5.0


Large in frame and singing it's own windsong
Of lonliness, I see Destiny flowing,
And tinged blue. While billowing among
Shadows, strange whisperings start, below
Which I cannot survive without some
Sense of settled hope. Will our future hold
Us to ransom, or lift us to light? Come,
Look at my heart how it yearns, embolden
Each verse where I hold your strong image.
Wrap up the sweet treasures you danced my way
With yesterday's rhymes. Your assurance edges
My dreams with stardust with which I, paying
The price of believing all things, believe.
Come, reduce the size of alone. Release me
With more taste of sweet love. I need relief.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonnie Collins 08 April 2009

A very good write with very meaningfull expressions.. You have given this a very emotional feel....

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Ency Bearis 08 April 2009

the context is meaningful...emotionally narrated well..great poem...10

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Fay. i just woke.. well. itis 2: 02 Am.. and something told me, Fay posted.. I had to read.. God knows why.. beautiful.. I like this! ! been there, will rise

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Tsira Goge 08 April 2009

Release me With more taste of sweet love. I need relief... ..................................................................... Fay, Good phrase, with deep implied sense... 10... All best, Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 09 April 2009

Exceptional title. You have written your longing into every beautiful line. You have the power to move the reader. Thank you for the rare privilege of reading your work. You are one of poemhunters finest. Love, SandraX

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Fiona Davidson 08 April 2009

Beautiful wistful write Fay...I can feel the longing running through your words....Fi...10++

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Sandra Martyres 08 April 2009

Beautiful expressions Fay that seem to flow so gently from your pen....10+++++

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Lynda Robson 08 April 2009

Beautiful write Fay, each line flows into the next, meaningful and heartfelt, 10 Lynda xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 April 2009

This is so full of meaning for so many Fay, beautiful write as always lady...10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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