diana rose tolentino


Grow Old Waiting - Poem by diana rose tolentino

watching the sun setting down again
Another day past waiting in vain
With hope that tomorrow would be the day
That you will finally find your way.

Sitting in the porch sipping cold tea
Looking far, dreaming of you and me
Background music, sweet melody
Leaves dancing in perfect harmony

In the end I'll got up with misty eyes
Remembering how we had said goodbyes
Memories that are both bitter and cold
Faded pictures now that I am old.


Comments about Grow Old Waiting by diana rose tolentino

  • Gold Star - 9,429 Points Amitava Sur (2/21/2014 7:00:00 AM)

    Enjoyed the penning detailing the memories, both bitter and cold

    You nay read my poem Another day is a past. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Merrill Auguste (1/26/2014 6:08:00 AM)

    wonderful read the imagery is there, I felt the fire but no volcano, thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (10/22/2013 2:14:00 AM)

    Wow, mesmerizing poem...truly romantically dramatic! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,249 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (10/8/2013 6:16:00 AM)

    loved this bitter sweet poem, Diana. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 8, 2013


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