Guy In The Chair ....... [a Response To Eugene Levich's Ph Poem 'The Pelican'; Mythology; Short; A Bit Of Humor Perhaps] Poem by Bri Edwards

Guy In The Chair ....... [a Response To Eugene Levich's Ph Poem 'The Pelican'; Mythology; Short; A Bit Of Humor Perhaps]



I spy an old guy in a big lounging chair.
I see him as, o'er him, I glide on the air.

I know he wishes to know....where i reside,
and from him that information I'll not now hide.

“I live on a nearby island, Ithaca by name,
and Ulysses dallies in Troy, but him I don't blame.

“But while Ulysses dallies in war I dally in love,
with mortals from Earth and gods from above.

“And my name is Penelope, as near-guessed your wife.
I'll fly home with my fish now. You both have a good life.”

(May 13,2014)

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: mythology
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i wrote this as part of my comment at my PH friend Eugene's poem. i had to do a little research into ulysses and penelope. i hope he didn't mean u.s. grant and penelope cruz! :) bri
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 09 June 2017

Love the incredible effort you go to reading others work. Thank you.Bri. Champion!

1 1 Reply
Amitava Sur 27 May 2014

Just loved it in reading and enjoyed it.

1 1 Reply
Valsa George 14 May 2014

I read Eugene's poem The Pelican and your response “But while Ulysses dallies in war I dally in love, with mortals from Earth and gods from above......... This is a distortion of the legend... While her husband Ulysses was away, Penelope wasted her youth in hopeful expectation of the return of her husband. Like a faithful wife, she withstood all temptations of marriage from mortals and gods alike. Interesting write!

1 1 Reply
Eugene Levich 14 May 2014

Dear Bri-lliance, My thanks to you (and Penelope) for this lovely poem. (Just watch the Old Guy business!) Yes, she (or he) is a Brown Pelican. You deserve another ice cream cone! Your Pal, Gino

1 1 Reply
Eugene Levich 14 May 2014

Dear Bri- lliance, Thank you (and Penelope) so much for this lovely poem! (Just watch the Old Guy business!) You are right of course, she (or he) is a Brown Pelican. You deserve another ice cream cone! Gino

1 1 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards

Earth, i believe
Close
Error Success