Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 9,939 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

H-E-L-L-O - Poem by Amitava Sur

H –E - L – L -O
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H-E-L-L-O OOOOOOOOO -
My sons and daughters on this earth–
All you -get up and open your eyes -
Look through the window
And look at the sky -

The morning sun is kissing your cheeks -
And saying- -
“Hey babies- my lovely son and daughters -
Be charged up with my warm kiss,
Get up and start the day - smartly with all my bliss.
You all are the winners and you all have to win
My best wishes are there with you –
For each of you to win.”

===================================< br>Amitava (16.5.2013) morning 6-30A.M.


Comments about H-E-L-L-O by Amitava Sur

  • Gold Star - 23,989 Points Roseann Shawiak (3/31/2014 4:28:00 AM)

    Love this poem, Amitava. It is how I feel every morning as I see the sun rise,
    wishing the day a good morning, your good wishes to each of us is an added
    bonus when reading it. Will come back and read it often if you don't mind.
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  • Gold Star - 4,662 Points Patricia Grantham (10/3/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    Such happiness to see the morning Sun. Awaken, arise and
    experience a brand new day. A very positive thought for a new
    day! Inspiring write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/2/2013 7:46:00 AM)

    Thanks for brightness.......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, March 31, 2014


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