Haiku 4 (Crocuses Revised And Original) Poem by Savita Tyagi
Haiku 4 (Crocuses Revised And Original)
Haiku 4 Revised
feisty crocuses
brutal frost scares not these
bold yellow trumpets
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haiku 4 (Original)
Feisty yellow crocuses
Trumpeting for spring in Feb.
Not scared of March frost!
Those crocuses are bold. They must show up when it is time.
And to respect nature; with the love of your heart. Thanks for sharing.
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5/6/2024 3:10:30 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Let the crocuses bloom in February and delight our eyes! The March frost may or may not be there! Great Haiku..... but the middle line has exceeded the syllable count of seven!
Thanks Valsa. I was going to put Feb. to make right count but I guess missed it while posting.