Chaste unwed maidens
Bowing down so shy and coy
On first macho touch
This is an artistic portrayal of the emotional state of a damsel's first encounter with her youful sensuousness. Thanks for sharing the poem, Valsa ji.
Bowing down in shyness is very wonderful expression of first touch here. Love is expressed in fantastic way to elaborate inner idea.10
How nature adds beauty and joy to this painful life, everyone knows it but everyone cannot describe it like Valsa. It's only Valsa who is capable of making a thing of beauty even more beautiful than what actually it is, It's a proof that she is born for poetry.
Fusion of words blending to form a dance of chaste love – with just 3 lines. wonderful
That is a beautiful haiku with a wonderfully complementing image. (10)
Wow, so nicely written and picture adds flavour to your haiku............10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A befitting picture post expressing the deep sensuous emotion as very rightly told in those few words.