He Still Peeps Poem by Akhtar Jawad

He Still Peeps

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I closed the door of my heart,
for a friend I was unhappy with,
I closed the windows as well,
but I could not close the cracks of its bleeding walls,
I get only a glimpse of his tearful eyes,
but he sees me,
when in cold winter of loneliness,
the dry cracks are painful,
his tears make the cracks humid
and as long as he peeps from the cracks,
I am relieved of the deadly pain.

Wednesday, December 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: friend
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 December 2016

True friendship exists inspite of several hindrances. A beautiful poem shared. Thanks sir.

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Rajnish Manga 08 December 2016

The spirit of friendship between true friends cannot go away even after a misunderstanding. It will find ways to redeem itself. The poet has portrayed this situation quite beautifully. Thanks. .....for a friend I was unhappy with, as long as he peeps from the cracks, I am relieved of the deadly pain.

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Khalid Saifullah 07 December 2016

A touching write, .......................................................

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Abhilasha Bhatt 07 December 2016

A friend....great gift from god....loved this amazing creation :)

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