Hushed and hydrated,
Water-wet otters,
Timorous creatures,
Dissension dislike.
Hostile approaches,
Raising reactions.
Daring offensives
Unnerving the pike.
Opposing behaviour
Self-will underpins.
Courage in warfare
Means he who dares
....................... wins!
Fay, really like the way you composed this. Excellent piece of poetry.10/10 Regards, Ian
Your a fine writer Fay, smiles timid heart they say.. :) Andy 10
Fay, I liked this, especially the last stanza. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David
Opposing behaviour Self-will underpins. Courage in warfare Means he who dares ....................... wins! Strong words, it is remarkable. 10............. Thank you Fay... Tsira
Top notch poem Fay, love otters such cheeky chappies 10 Daniel
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I would like to translate this poem
he who dares wins...like no pain no glory is it! ! ! Loved your poem........