Vonda Overlie

Rookie - 64 Points (Havre)

Head On! - Poem by Vonda Overlie

Then tell me how a man romances you. Please

first by the way he treats me
and that is with respect
he pays attention to me
but not too much
he pays me compliments
but not too much
he makes me miss him
he kisses my forehead
and cheek
and treats me like a lady
makes me wanna rip my clothes off for him


Comments about Head On! by Vonda Overlie

  • Gold Star - 8,646 Points Bri Edwards (9/8/2013 5:03:00 PM)

    FYI....typo...he pays ne compliments

    the ending made me chuckle....kind of a lustful chuckle?

    i liked the not too much parts especially. thanks for sharing. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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