Dwi utami

Rookie - 3 Points (11-11-1986 / Ngawi.jawa timur)

*heart Solitude* - Poem by Dwi utami

I'to pass alone the cold night without tears*
Attempt for standing without love and try the feeling heart solitude*
I'passed my long night without word's*
without power*

Tried for to pass the current ocean of love that has bring me in heart solitude*
Tried for running to resist the current dark night that was impossible*

When the current attacked and made collapse my heart*
I'fall and sink in heart solitude*
Hoped received the warm hug*
Waiting the holy kiss*

I'passed my heart solitude*
Tried to erase my feel yearn that was impossible*
I'planted my longing too much in grounds my heart, and only will become wound in my heart**


Comments about *heart Solitude* by Dwi utami

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (8/2/2010 1:30:00 PM)

    ‘Hoped received the warm hug*
    Waiting the holy kiss*’ ~ Here swing of emotion…lovely…

    ‘I'planted my longing too much in grounds my heart, and only will become wound in my heart**’ ~ Here de=swing of emotion…it is called poetic twist and you’ve carried me till last two lines…deluge of emotion…excellent from heart in solitude the womb of poetry… thanks sharing…
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 29, 2010



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