Dwi utami

Rookie - 3 Points (11-11-1986 / Ngawi.jawa timur)

*Rain and Tear*


I'was first that my hopes, the angel came to remove my tear*
The rainbow i'm so sorry if today i'have sadness*
The blue sky i'm so sorry if today i'have sadness*
My dove i'm so sorry if today i'have sadness*
My flowers in the garden i'm so sorry i'have sadness*
The Lord in heaven i'm so sorry if today i'have sadness*

The downpour descended from sky*
Where today my eyes yearn for the face of my sweetheart*

I'was first that my hopes, the angel came to remove my tear*
I'never saw the face of my sweetheart forevermore*
Him hid far in sea, hid far behind the sun*

The downpour descended from sky*
Rain was the face of my sweetheart*
Where he was crying from heaven*
Cried I'saw rain*
Face rain of my sweetheart*

I'was first that my hopes*
The angel came to remove my tear**

Submitted: Wednesday, July 21, 2010

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Comments about this poem (*Rain and Tear* by Dwi utami )

  • Rookie Subhajit Biswas (8/2/2010 1:20:00 AM)

    Emmm nice poem like u..: heart: (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Malaya Roses (8/1/2010 11:07:00 PM)

    Sadness and hopes always walk on the same path where the end is to reach hapiness and dream should come true.
    Pray and good wish shall drive someone to better pattern of life and down to earth.
    Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,744 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2010 9:08:00 PM)

    The rainbow i'm so sorry if today i'have sadness*
    The blue sky i'm so sorry if today i'have sadness*
    My dove i'm so sorry if today i'have sadness*, , no sadness dear as i will feel the colors to frnds like rainbow....10.. welcome (Report) Reply

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