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(March 25,1986 / Orange, California)

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Heartache

I see her in the morning.
I think of her in the night.
And all the hours in between,
She enslaves my very sight.

Her shiny black hair
Is like silky waves of night.
Her deep blue eyes are
Portals of mysterious light.

Her smile is magnificent.
Her teeth are always glimmering.
Her body is phenomenal.
Her laughter is always ringing.

She has a corner office.
I have a corner store.
I await the moment every morning
When she opens up my door.

She is perfect
In every single way.
All she has to do
Is everything I say.

She's married with children.
I'm single with none.
She seems so intense,
But maybe she's the one.

She'll be here soon.
What do I do?
I've absolutely, positively
Fallen for Sue.

I'm a fool.
I've fallen into a trap.
Help me find my way.
Can you lend me a map?

She's intoxicating.
She's out of her mind.
She follows me home
And tries to be kind.

She rearranges my furniture.
She decorates my house.
She adores this little puppy
That looks like a mouse.

She whispers and gossips
And whistles and prances.
She sends everyone into
Their own kind of trances.

She tasted better
Than blueberry wine.
She sure did crush this
Little heart of mine.

Submitted: Sunday, April 04, 2010


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  • Richard D. Remler (4/27/2010 12:34:00 AM)

    First she's this desireable, intoxicating woman, then she's a psycho stalker. lol. Scary. An entertaining write. Thanks for sharing. 10***

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  • Rex Lemon (4/4/2010 8:39:00 PM)

    Damn that's good... We all have our 'Sue' Check out my poem, 'Ugly MoFo' it's similar, but in a comical way..

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