*** Heaven Can Wait *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

*** Heaven Can Wait ***

Rating: 4.6


Zephyr emasculates mind fermented
Gem shimmers in you…
Gamma lantern blue
Hanging tough
Queen Mary’s chandelier……your stare
Glossing into my spines………..am paralyzed
Clouds of Reykjavik graying
Showers of Alpine ices, cooling…
Heart of me growing
Inching….
The days
I crawl to you…………on upper limbs
Safari’s wilderness clogging
Soul of me
What a life………..
You annexed my inner territory
Routing my defensive ………..seamless
Don’t ignore me
Even a glance
Baby you…come over here
The javelin and the sphere…..
You and me
Symbols of twosome spree
Warriors never say quit
Our rhythms flow parading the melodies
Confined
Listen……to the dreams
The husky voices…………….stimulate
We would never get a second chance
Should we…
Adrift too far
From the roof of Saturn
En route to Heaven
Oh honey…….so lovely
I just want to die in your arms.........
It’s all white……..famishing
As our love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hamid Kareem 19 November 2008

nice poem.. carrried me along till the end.. nice imagery.. i could almost picturise and actually see it unraveling.... great work. keep it up... have to vote this

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Colm Hayes 23 November 2008

Another excellent piece my friend, fantastic frantic imagery, I especially liked the layout used here it seems to add to the changing pictures very well, good job.

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Mike Susak 25 November 2008

very good, writing, so from the heart, i love your writing, and can't wait to read more

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Kresta Farr 26 November 2008

a very passionate poem, showing the depth of your heart, true writing comes from within and this is a truely inspirational piece

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Trinidad Villafranca 03 December 2008

OMG I love it nice work you definitly have a talented gathering of words.

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Aparna Sinha 29 July 2009

Loved it....its a wonderful piece of art

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Gengis Capote 18 July 2009

enjoyed your poem, thank you for sharing your art.

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Afzal Shauq 07 July 2009

sweet and a reality based one..liked it much..well doen friend..10++++++++++++

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Meggie Gultiano 01 July 2009

your words are soft, tender and loving... I just love this..a great piece

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Abby Mackaway 12 June 2009

From someone who has a deep appreciation of fine vocabulary, I love this piece, especially the first part. The are few writers these days who really get into the words they are writing and see them for what they are. you have done brilliantly. With respect, Abby

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