Hello! Hello! Poem by ckim mbasa

Hello! Hello!

Rating: 4.8


Hello I’m calling again,
on the door I’m waiting,
For the balcony seem to be done with me,
I’ll wait till dusk I promise.

Hello I’m calling again,
Look at me I’m straining,
Rain on me I’m waiting,
For drizzles seem to be tough.

Hello I’m calling again,
Seemingly you tend to be busy,
Welcome me if you can’t mind,
For my heart need rest.

Hello I’m calling again
Again and again to be heard,
For denial deal no matter what,
This is me calling again.

Hello I’m calling again,
For the sound seem not new,
Is me calling you again,
For I can’t wait no more!

Thursday, August 1, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: welcome
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 14 August 2013

you are a very patient person to wait and wait. this is very expressive

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Gajanan Mishra 01 August 2013

great write, thanks, go on.

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Ckim Mbasa 14 April 2015

We really need to be patient @Heather

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Ckim Mbasa 14 April 2015

Thanks alot @Gajanan

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Dave Walker 01 August 2013

A good poem, like it.

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Ckim Mbasa 14 April 2015

Thanks @Dave Walker

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