ckim mbasa


Hello! Hello! - Poem by ckim mbasa

Hello I’m calling again,
on the door I’m waiting,
For the balcony seem to be done with me,
I’ll wait till dusk I promise.

Hello I’m calling again,
Look at me I’m straining,
Rain on me I’m waiting,
For drizzles seem to be tough.

Hello I’m calling again,
Seemingly you tend to be busy,
Welcome me if you can’t mind,
For my heart need rest.

Hello I’m calling again
Again and again to be heard,
For denial deal no matter what,
This is me calling again.

Hello I’m calling again,
For the sound seem not new,
Is me calling you again,
For I can’t wait no more!


Comments about Hello! Hello! by ckim mbasa

  • Gold Star - 9,874 Points Heather Wilkins (8/14/2013 7:53:00 PM)

    you are a very patient person to wait and wait. this is very expressive (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 34,032 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/1/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    great write, thanks, go on. (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 86 Points Ckim Mbasa (4/14/2015 1:06:00 AM)

    We really need to be patient @Heather

    Rookie - 86 Points Ckim Mbasa (4/14/2015 1:05:00 AM)

    Thanks alot @Gajanan

  • Silver Star - 3,778 Points Dave Walker (8/1/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    A good poem, like it. (Report) Reply

    Rookie - 86 Points Ckim Mbasa (4/14/2015 1:05:00 AM)

    Thanks @Dave Walker

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, April 13, 2015


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