i had a dream
the dream was beautiful
so i shared it with you
i had a heart
the heart was fragile
i gave it to you
you had a dream
the dream must have been beautiful
the dream was never shared
you had a heart
human heart but of stone
mine too frail to stay with you
yet it stayed
but yours went away
and left a hole in my heart
There is none who can heal the hurt heart! You have to mend it.Great!
excellent....the caption of the poemt itself is very catchy! ! ! !
How sad Kanava! ! Like a citadel with bullet holes, your heart is left with a hole. Who did that offense to you, after so willingly sharing everything of yours with her? She should be penalised.....! !
an arresting title indeed and a good poem developed on it...! ! !
A heart in love is a fragile heart left with a hole by a the one made of stone, a unique idea. You've nicely presented pun on words!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It's sad. Beautiful poem Kanav. Loved it.