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Antonio Liao (10/1/2008 7:39:00 PM)
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yah! so gentle whisper of the heart....... silence is the wisdom of hour, never it say... more of what is happening, yet....the hour witness all the moment of every
minutes and seconds of time and life....you hold the moment of each readers, your poem
realize that every event is moment of hour to remember... a great poem 10+...
thank you my friend Rani
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Tom Balch (10/1/2008 1:21:00 PM)
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The 'unspoken' can sometimes say more than the spoken,10+ regards Tom
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David Threadgold (10/1/2008 9:56:00 AM)
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A great read and well put together. well done Regards Dave T. **10**
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Manonton Dalan (10/1/2008 12:35:00 AM)
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when hours stop, you ain't forgotten
somebody waiting for you in heaven
above ground remember your kindness
your love, your anger and your patience
so keep hoping, keep loving, in small steps
goodness, deep in our heart an mind keeps
thanks. marvelous poem. md
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Dwayne Bailey (9/27/2008 5:39:00 AM)
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Great poem and great play on words. A 10 to say the least. Dwayne Bailey
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Antonio Liao (9/19/2008 3:42:00 AM)
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what a poem... you made me laugh and feel ashame....you have touch my heart and my mind... i like your style...keep it on... i have a fun in reading your poem 10/10
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Kesav Easwaran (9/17/2008 8:42:00 AM)
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'Phrases are like life; sometimes broken
At times unfinished and often unspoken'
Wonderful speaking line...a lovely poem on hours, alien...ten for you Rani
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Kris Smith (9/17/2008 8:12:00 AM)
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You have excelled yourself lady I will be thinking about that poem all day thanks Chris 10 x
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