Human Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

Like origin of Universe Grand Unified Theory Exactly Swami Vivekananda extolled ‘Universal Religion’ …it is also advocated in Vedas good poem… Thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Mohammad-ji Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

It is human's idea to be seperated in this world, human made God Hindu, Muslim and ect, God is just one and bright people know that.Thanks for sharing thoughts through poetry.

Nice poem but a bit illogical. He created human being to worship Him but they detached themselves from Him and got themselves astray. Your approach is quite honest though a bit skewd. Be cheerful.

Choice and variation of preference could be the reason but as long as we live under the roof of tolerance and kindness... peace will remain.

UNBEALIABLE! I WISH I COULD WRITE THIS POEM! I AM REALLY STUNNED AND SPEECHLESS, …YOU ARE REALLY A TALENTED ONE, I LIKE THE WAY PUT THE THINGS TOGETHER, YOUR POEM IS A MIND STORMING ONE ……BUT VERY SOOTHING TO THE SOUL, I LIKE IT AND I LIKE TO YOU MY NEW POEMS, ESPECIALLY ‘’I WANT TO DIE’’

I love it, it short and sweet and to the point. I too wonder about the same thing and I think taht we who feel this way can do something about it, we can create a change. I was on my way to University and I was just thinking about what is going on in Somalia and I asked myself 'Are we really humans if we lack humanity, and how can I call myself a human when I am watching fellow humanking suffering before my very eyes. It would be nice if all the writers got together and started organising some form aid beyond words, I would like to think that it is possible. anyway your poems inspire great ideas

A short poem with such a conclusive idea about global comunities. As the great ideas, the strong essences lie in small bottles..Cristina Teodor

Short but effective..well said. SG

Amen-you said it right-great thoughts-written with brevity- oh for brotherhood-a good write-a10 Joe