I Am Not Lost Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Am Not Lost

Rating: 5.0


Affinity in infinity,
the color contrast!
I may be insignificant
but I am noticeable.
Fancy colors with ecstatic smells
who is a better teacher than the flowers?
Life divided in sex,
Creating ability confined in nature,
divided in two dissimilar poles,
the romantic big bang,
cause of attraction,
to search the treasure of the pleasure
I love and I am loved, I am not lost.
I am significant.
I just need to unite once again,
either in a moonlit night when stars are shy
or in a cloudy day when clouds hide the sky.
The spectrum of earth will show me in love
after thousands of light years
to an alien trying to understand how humans love.
Who says I am insignificant?
I am significant.
I am not lost.
(Being inspired by the cover photo of my friend Marie Shine at facebook)

I Am Not Lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marie Shine 28 May 2019

So pleased the Fb Timeline Cover I currently have on my account has inspired you to pen this superb write, dear Akhtar! You definitely are not insignificant in any way. You stand out in a field of poets pretty as an individual, unique flower. Lovely reasoning, excellent visual detail and beautiful presentation. Tfs, dear friend Akhtar...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 May 2019

who is a better teacher than the flowers? Life divided in, Creating ability confined in nature,

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 May 2019

better teacher than the flowers? Life divided in, Creating ability confined in nature, divided in two dissimilar poles jusss greattttttttttttttttttt

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 June 2019

o an alien trying to understand how humans love. you urself maybe that lucky alien to explain

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 June 2019

No one is insignificant in the scheme of the Almighty. Every atom has a role to play. Let there be a shift of just one atom and the nature of the matter changes. Yes one has tremendous affinity in infinity. A thinking poet writing from heart.

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I concur with the wonderful comments of Marie Shine. You are a great Poet and a great thinker, you.are always significant in.the world of poetry. You are a great.father, you.are significant in your family. You are concerned for the welfare of.the people and sensitive to the issues concerning them.You are significant before the eyes of your countrymen

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We are created unique and for a purpose. We maybe insignificant to other people but under the eyes of God, we are all significant.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 May 2019

better teacher than the flowers? Life divided in, Creating ability confined in nature, divided in two dissimilar poles

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