I am the world
My body is the world
In miniature
See here everything
Change in the body
Signifies the change
In the world
Non-existence of this body
Signifies non-existence
Of the world.
I like the philosophical take this poem has. I think the poem's brisk pace makes it a good read. I think one thing that might make it a bit tighter would be if you could wrap lines 4-7 around a simile or metaphor. But, hey, I really liked the poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
this is the old indian philosophy....the whole world is in our body.....