I Believe Poem by ajith patnaik
I Believe
in my dreams in my sleep you are what i see,
in my memories you're the one who's there for eternity.
i believe that you are someone that i will never leave
to be with u and live with u is my greatest fantacy
in the oceans in the sky when the clouds are passing by,
i'll be there all the way all the while.
when the sun is in the sky when the stars are glowing bright
i'll be there all the way all the time
all the time, all the while i dont think am complete
to get to you and hug u back is my all time destiny
no one can calculate my true love density
tale me there and show me her is all that i will need
get me her get me there wanna see her everywhere
i love her all the time is all i say
wish for her and her face is now all that i care
i will sleep on her lap everyday
'all the time, all the while i dont think am complete to get to you and hug u back is my all time destiny'... beautiful lines...sweet and expressive...good poem, Ajith...ten for you for this
Dear Ajith, Very nice lines.Very beautiful expression.. YOu have got a great way to go ahead and you hold lots of promises.
Good poem you show lots of promise you ask for suggestions well Drop the u and wanna its like you are writing a text and want to finish quick, the more you read top poems the better, keep up the good work regards
wow really sweet so u want to sleep on her lap every day wowwwwwwww beautiful -10 anjali
Yes, it's good. But is it exactly what you wanted to say in ever way you could have said it? I liked it but it felt like you were holding back. There's nothing to do but be honest in poetry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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this poem of you is very beautiful, ..though it's my first time to join here but it seems i like to write also, , , i don't know about poetries, i just want to read..you are a good writer indeed.. february