I Brushed Off Your Shadow Poem by Hebert Logerie
I Brushed Off Your Shadow
My eyes were wide open
Babe, when I brushed off your shadow
In my dark room
I had the thrill and the chill, and my limbs
Have vibrated as if the earth
Was flickering subtly.
Your perfume was on my pillows
Your silent voice was whistling
And disturbing the peace
Which existed in my thoughts
Your spirit was, with me, present
Yes, I touched your shadow by accident.
Copyright © February 2019, Hébert Logerie, All rights reserved
Hébert Logerie is the author of several books of poems.
What an interesting concept, to brush off a shadow! As the poetess said, you have a great imagination! Thanks for posting.
Forgot to mention: Congrats on having it chosen as member poem of the day!
Very nice use of words. You shared story of a woman and a memory. Woman can make us wish and hope. A excellent poem.
Your silent voice was whistling. Good. Congrats
I have read this poem in French, it sounds more beautiful! Ta voix calme siffla Et a perturbé la paix Il existait au creux de mon esprit Tes pensées étaient avec moi Oui, j'ai accidentellement touché ton ombre. Je peux seulement dire: À couper le souffle! ...................A 10=+++++++ for the scintillating poem.CONGRATS for the MPOTD!
What a thrilling poem! Congrats on being poet of the day! You deserve it.
A sweet love poem. Great imagery. Love is sublime and divine and world needs this so much now. Congrats.
The world is full of love and this love poem is so beautiful
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Highly imaginative poem, Hebert. Enjoyed immensely!