Time went on slipping further
You too slipped away
In span of time.
Helplessly I watched you
Both slipping
With no grip on
I couldn't hold on your hands.
Well time was running very short
My spell to tell
I love you
Was very long.
Before I could
Tell you anything
I lost grip of you.
I couldn't hold on your hands.
Was it my love for you,
Was not strong enough,
Was it just one side affair,
that time in my square was very shorter.
I kept running inside a circle
If I could break away the square
I would have been in your arms my dear!
©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR
© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar
Note. My Imagination.
Time went on slipping. Really sorry I could not hold hands of time as like as wings of sky. Amazing poem with wonderful imagery. Special poem definitely.
Delayed Justice is Denied Justice, and when justice is denied one will have to face the consequences. Love is the supreme justice, a justice not only with the beloved only but a justice with ourselves as well...............10
Regret over a lost opportunity.....! To have loved and lost is better to have never loved at all! Great write! Enjoyed the flow of words and feelings!
Love slips away - hold on to the hands firmly. Beautifully put in the poem.
Your heart touches us all like no other, again I read these words seeing future light shining.
Briefly have conveyed the message strongly.........................very nice
Some poems I missed, now this lovable poem made me to a dream of reality Was it my love for you, Was not strong enough, Was it just one side affair, that time in my square was very shorter.
The beauty i see these line is uncomparable. Yes we hide our feelings for a longtime. by the time we are people the person slips away and we linger then for a life. Time went on slipping further You too slipped away In span of time.
Wow! ! ! ..such an excellent poem Geehta Madam...loved it like anything...Thanks.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great imagination with great composition on softer emotions......Geetha.......amazing write....10