I Found You- (For My Best Friend) Poem by Claudia Krizay

I Found You- (For My Best Friend)

Rating: 5.0


Alone in this world,
Not meant for me to live in, I never knew
Why the sun rose and set, why it rained so hard-
My tears, my tears-That fell upon the edge of time-
The three quarter moon last night
I could almost reach with arms outstretched-
So it seemed, so I wondered where in this universe
Is there a place for me? Every morning, every night
Walking the same path hoping to find,
At the end of my journey-
Although only the same valley,
The same trees and the same creek- and
Then I found you.
You, with the sparkling eyes of green,
You with the hair, reddish gold as the sun
That rose and set and
That welcoming, winning smile and
Then I could see that outstretched arms
Could belong to someone else and
How these arms were reaching out to me?
Instantly you became a blossoming daffodil
In the same familiar valley, standing stately
Beneath that same familiar tree, wading in that nearby creek-
Alone as I, you were and we connected as
Two shooting stars meeting in the universe so vast and
The rain stopped, as we circle danced with the
Elegance and mysticism as the rings of Saturn?
As with the wave of the hand of a sorcerer, we became one-
Sharing our delusions of the meaning of life,
Together we found a world of our own- one meant for the
Two of us alone- where the sun rose and set-
Just for you and I, and I know now that no matter how hard it rains and
Even if I never saw the sun rise and set again
My tears- my tears have disappeared because I have found you-
My own sun- that shooting star that has given me light and
I can see to walk down any path and no matter which path I walk-
I shall find you near and shall never be alone, again-
And when we reach the end of any path- we shall circle dance together
Surrounded by the light emitted from our laughter,
Beneath the light of the three quarter moon-
Upon the edge of time, everlasting…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 26 September 2011

What a beautiful poem, friendship is worth more than gold any day, great poem. A ten.

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Ken E Hall 09 October 2011

Very nice to read as your journey goes along with luvli narration and the universal friend Upon the edge of time, everlasting++++10...regards

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Allemagne Roßmann 02 October 2011

A wonderful journey that lived in memories of love..very well writtena and enigmatic effort here..

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 01 October 2011

beautiful...............

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Vipins Puthooran 30 September 2011

What an amazing poem...excellent poetry... I like it very much. Thanks for sharing with us

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Uche Chidozie 26 September 2011

If i can find my own shooting star, who, with her light, i will walk any path, i'll be okaY, NICE WORK

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